The Truth About Tigers

occasional musings and free verse poetry, approximately



A Visitor’s Guide to Free Coffee

When you spend enough time in a hospital—
as a visitor, not a patient—
you start to learn a few things.

Like how the coffee costs more
at the first-floor café
than it does on the second.

But it’s free in the fourth-floor ICU,
where there’s an honest-to-God espresso machine.
Outpatient surgery on three
offers a complimentary pour-over.

And if you befriend the nurses,
they might let you slip into the lounge,
where snacks and caffeine
cost nothing.

You’ll learn other things, too—

Like how, one afternoon in the cafeteria,
while drafting a poem you might call
A Visitor’s Guide to Free Coffee,
a young mother and her son—
his head bald from chemo—
will walk in.

You’ll watch his face light up
over a bowl of cereal
and feel ridiculous
for thinking about the cost of coffee
in a place built to save
the most vulnerable.

The boy will beam at his mom,
thrilled by the simple gift of Cocoa Puffs.
She’ll smile back—
brave, bone-tired—
and lean in to kiss his pale scalp,
her whole world on the edge of crumbling
behind those worn-out eyes.


Note: A version of “A Visitor’s Guide to Free Coffee” was first published as a prose poem at Six Sentences — July 2025.

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  1. Bartholomew Barker Avatar
    Bartholomew Barker

    Funny how “normal” things feel so special in hospitals.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      They really do.

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  2. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    This one hits me hard, Nick.

    The quiet observations at first almost lull me in—then that turn in the cafeteria folds the whole piece in on itself. The contrast between coffee and Cocoa Puffs is so understated and so powerful.

    ~David

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  3. Nick Allison Avatar
    Nick Allison

    Thank you, David. Your compliments really mean a lot to me.

    Back in September, my Dad ended up in the ICU for a month with throat cancer. At the same time he was life flighted and admitted, the hospital experienced a ransomware attack. For most of that month we spent there, there was no access to TV or Wifi. So I passed the time reading and writing. I ended up with around 25 poems from that month. This is the only one I’ve shared so far. Maybe I’ll do something with the rest someday.

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