The Truth About Tigers

occasional musings and free verse poetry, approximately



Consciousness

What flickers first—
is it sight or thought?
What holds the body’s ache
and also the ache of loss?

What builds the self, brick by brick,
only to watch it dissolve?
And what remains,
but the stillness in which
all things arise and fall?


Written in response to De Jackson’s prompt over at dVerse Poet’s Pub: Quadrille #212 – “What the What?” The challenge this week is to write a poem of exactly 44 words, including some form of the word “what.”


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  1. erbiage Avatar
    erbiage

    castles in the sand. Great write nick. Look to that which endures

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you!

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  2. whimsygizmo Avatar
    whimsygizmo

    Such gorgeous cadence here. Just wonderful, Nick.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you! And thanks for the great prompt. I really enjoy the Quadrille challenges!

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      1. whimsygizmo Avatar
        whimsygizmo

        My pleasure! The Quadrille is my favorite. 🙂

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    It is amazing how much that just wither in silence.

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  4. paeansunplugged Avatar
    paeansunplugged

    Some questions have no answers. A great write, Nick.

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  5. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    Wonderful poem, Nick with wonderment. Great lines wove 💕

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      Nick Allison

      Thank you so much, Cindy!

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