The Truth About Tigers

occasional musings and free verse poetry, approximately



Beneath a Canopy

Beneath a canopy of questioning night,
Where shadows and desire weave a quiet thread,
Dead gods gaze upon this clandestine flight,
Lost souls entangled in the tales ahead.
Through sheets of darkness, touch becomes our light,
A language spoken with words left unsaid,
Each sigh unveils a cosmos vast and wide,
Where in the silent rush, veiled truths reside.


Written in response to Grace’s prompt over at dVerse Poets Pub: Write an Ottavo Rima poem written in 8-line octaves. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in the following rhyme: one octave poem. abababcc.

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  1. Grace Avatar
    Grace

    This is a such a stunning octave poem. Your rhyming verses flow so well. Made me think about creation with this line: Each sigh unveils a cosmos vast and wide. Thanks so much Nick for joining in!

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you so much, Grace!

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  2. Grace Avatar
    Grace

    You can also share this poem for OpenLinkNight on Thursday next week, if you like. Have a good weekend.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you, Grace. I might do that!

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    Anonymous

    This is really lovely.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you!

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I really love this one, the theme so classical, and with a flawless rhythm

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Wow! Thank you, Bjorn! I really appreciate your encouraging comment.

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  5. Melissa Lemay Avatar
    Melissa Lemay

    I like the questioning night, and, like Grace, I like sighs unveiling the cosmos.🪐🌌

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