The Truth About Tigers

occasional musings and free verse poetry, approximately



Our Line of Work

Memories scatter, converge like leaves
Blown across windswept winter lawns,
Gathering in great heaps against
Weathered wooden fences—
Half-hiding remnants of days past.

Straws trapped in cracked lids,
Homework sheets torn from hands
Of children stepping off the bus,
Casually abandoned, unworthy
Of a chase.

A few stray cigarette butts—
Relics rarely seen these days,
Where knowledge flows like smoke
We once inhaled with careless ease
In far-off desert lands,

When lung cancer was a distant dream,
Not a looming fate—something
Young men like us didn’t worry about
In our line of work.


Poetics: Young and Green at dVerse Poet’s Pub

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  1. dorahak Avatar
    dorahak

    The sense of disconnect is so sharp it almost hurts. The children/homework/school bus against cigarette butts/the memory of young men “in our line of work” in “far-flung desert lands” where death by cancer paled in comparison to death by war. Disjunctions finely crafted, brilliantly expressed through imagery.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you, Dora. I felt about the same, regarding the disconnect, when I was writing this see-saw of a poem!

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  2. rothpoetry Avatar
    rothpoetry

    I enjoyed your poem of days long gone. We did a lot of things with ease back then only to find they come back to bite us in the end.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Indeed, Dwight. Thank you.

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar
        rothpoetry

        You are welcome.

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I remember those times too, but I realized that cigarettes was not anything I wanted to deal with (I had too little pocket money anyway)

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  4. brendan563 Avatar
    brendan563

    I couldn’t wait to become an adult & start drinking & smoking – poor fool me – dumb rockers like me couldn’t line up fast enough for their “looming fate.” Like all the kids now emptying all hope of a mind zooming into screens. Same as it ever was.

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  5. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    “where they half-hide remnants of days past.”

    Somehow remnants of days past, can never be totally hidden.

    Excellent poem, Nick!

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Isn’t that the truth!

      Thank you ❤️

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      1. purplepeninportland Avatar
        purplepeninportland

        😁

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