The Truth About Tigers

occasional musings and free verse poetry, approximately



Pretty Things

She draws pretty things,
as girls her age often do—
a pastel-blue cloud dog
with floppy ears and long lashes,
starry eyes shedding pink-tinged tears
that fall like diamonds,
carve rivers through fur,
and crash like asteroids
near the bottom of the page,
where they swell into turquoise pools
that ripple, reach outward
as children cannonball
from rope-swings
tied to ancient cypress,
fleeing the thick weight of summer,
the stories of distant wars,

and the not-so-distant stories
of classrooms split by gunfire,
whispered to teachers and friends
in elementary school,
as they practice their monthly drills—
run, hide, fight
to prepare for violence
that should be unthinkable,
woven into their days, a failure
not of their making,
but of ours—
our generation,
and the generations before,
who failed our collective duty
to guard the fragile kingdom
of childhood.


An earlier version of this poem was published at Spillwords Press on February 12th, 2024.

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  1. Melissa Lemay Avatar
    Melissa Lemay

    There is a distinct separation between the first stanza and the next, the innocence of childhood incorporated into the artwork, almost dreamlike. Then the poem takes a turn for the worst, not as a poem, but in its statement about society and the horrors our children grow into, how unfortunate it is.
    While I don’t enjoy the subject matter, I enjoyed the piece. Way to go being published on Spillwords, Nick/Jake.🙃

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    1. Jake Avatar
      Jake

      Thank you, Melissa. I also don’t enjoy the subject matter. I’m 44 years old, and when I was her age, it wasn’t something that was even discussed. And now they have lockdown procedures and active shooter drills – and I’m not saying they shouldn’t. My daughter is 10 years old now, and it breaks my heart to hear her and her friends talk about it as casually as we would have discussed fire drills when I was a kid. Living in Texas, they are obviously all very aware of the horrible school shooting in Uvalde. I don’t claim to have all the answers, but it seems clear to me that we could collectively be doing a better job.

      I’m so happy you enjoyed the piece, Melissa. You are a wonderful writer. I really appreciate your kind words.

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      1. Melissa Lemay Avatar
        Melissa Lemay

        It sounds like we are on a similar wavelength. It breaks my heart, too. When I first learned of the active shooter drills, I think my oldest was in kindergarten.😢 He is 9 now. I am glad there are others who realize what a different world we live in now. Hopefully it doesn’t make you feel worse, this is something I wrote recently on the subject: https://melissalemay.wordpress.com/2023/11/02/elegy-for-the-children-gunned-down/

        Thank you for the compliment. I am always happy to meet writer friends here in the WordPress community.🤗

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      2. Nick A. Avatar
        Nick A.

        Well done, Melissa.

        And I love meeting writer friends here as well!

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  2. Kate Avatar
    Kate

    Wonderful, poignant poem, Nick/Jake. Well deserving of publication. 👏👏👏
    Kids have a rough time of it anymore, so many feeling like they don’t measure up. Social media has seen to that. And many have parents who ignore them in favor of their own phones. I think both parents and society share the blame.

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    1. Nick A. Avatar
      Nick A.

      Thank you, Kate. I agree with you, sadly, on all of that.

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  3. Lia Avatar
    Lia

    I love your daughter’s amazing drawing. It’s very creative such a perfect ekphrastic prompt. Wonderful collab, and congrats on publication!

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you, Lia!

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