The Truth About Tigers

occasional musings and free verse poetry, approximately



In the Depths of Winter

In the depths of winter, the village seemed suspended in time, each dwelling encased in a shroud of frost. It was here, amidst the silent sentinels of bare trees, that I found myself wandering, lost in thought. The lake, once teeming with splashes of summer lay still, a mirror reflecting the slate sky above. As I walked, my breath formed clouds in the air, each a cursory testament to life in the midst of this dormant world. I thought of the stories I had heard, tales of warriors who had gone before us, leaving only fading memories and fire-side lore in their wake. It struck me then, with a clarity as sharp as the winter air, how all of the names swallowed up by the cold were not gone, but woven into our fabric, lingering in the silence between snowflakes under a watchful moon.


Written in response to Björn Rudberg’s wonderful prosery prompt at dVerse Poet’s Pub: Write a piece of prose of exactly 144 words that includes the given line, “all of the names swallowed up by the cold” from Tomas Tranströmer’s beautiful poem, “After Someone’s Death.”

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  1. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    Nick, I really like how you used “how all of the names swallowed up by the cold were not gone, but woven into our fabric” to capture the theme of continuity and remembrance amidst the winter landscape in your prosery.

    ~David

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you, David.

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I really love what you did here, it flows so well and speaks out the truth how no one has truly left but stays behind with us..

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you, Bjorn. And thanks for the wonderful prompt. I hadn’t read “After Someone’s Death” before. But now I’m looking forward to reading more of Tomas Tranströmer’s poetry. In fact, I just ordered one of his collections!

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  3. Yvonne Osborne Avatar
    Yvonne Osborne

    I like the idea of names not being forgotten but woven into the fabric of our lives.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      As do I, Yvonne! Thank you.

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  4. Lia Avatar
    Lia

    How gorgeous!! Beautiful imagery beautifully written. <33

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you, Lia! ❤️

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  5. merrildsmith Avatar
    merrildsmith

    So beautifully written. I really like the final sentences and how you incorporated the line.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you so much, Merril

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      1. merrildsmith Avatar
        merrildsmith

        You’re welcome, Nick!

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  6. SiriusSea Avatar
    SiriusSea

    Nick, you paint with words beautifully and I can actually see your poetry !! ❤

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Well, that’s just about the best compliment a writer could hope for! Thank you!

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  7. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    On those kinds of days, reflection can yield bounty. Nice prose, Nick.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you kindly!

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      1. msjadeli Avatar
        msjadeli

        You’re welcome!

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    Anonymous

    beautiful thoughts, beautiful words. Especially the entire last sentence.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you!

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  9. Mia Winhertt Avatar
    Mia Winhertt

    You have a flair for beautiful language, Nick! 👍🏻

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      I’ll say the same to you! Thank you, Mia 😊

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      1. Mia Winhertt Avatar
        Mia Winhertt

        I’ll also reply like you did — thank you, Nick. 😊

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