The Truth About Tigers

occasional musings and free verse poetry, approximately



Fang

It’s not the darkness, but what it conceals,
What lurks beneath the skin’s facade,
Enveloped in layers of projection and guise.

The light from the quarter moon may shine,
Just bright enough to reveal the sclera and fang
In the gathering gloom of another arcadian night.

Lips are meant to curl, to show smile or snarl
Upon the electric frame of the face,
Left to shadow’s whim and intent’s interpretation.

Disguised dreams dance just beyond society’s gates,
Eager for whispers to find their mark,
While clouds loiter, veiling the stars above.


Written in response to Ragtag Daily Prompt Thursday, (The prompt for today is Fang) and Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt #352: (This weekend your challenge is to write a poem or a piece of prose in exactly 91 words using the word Intent).


Responses

  1. bushboy Avatar
    bushboy

    Love it. My favourite lines
    “Upon the electric frame of the face,
    Left to shadow’s whim and intent’s interpretation.”

    Thanks for joining in 🙂 🙂

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thanks! I wasn’t really thinking it at the time, but I’m pretty sure subconsciously that line was inspired by Dylan’s verse, “The ghost of ‘lectricity howls in the bones of her face,” from the song Visions of Johanna… which might be one of the greatest lines ever.

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      1. bushboy Avatar
        bushboy

        That’s why Dylan received the Nobel Prize 🙂

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  2. Lia Avatar
    Lia

    This is so, so good. I too loved that line “Upon the electric frame of the face” (I see your reply below and like this one better than Dylan’s – it’s more universal somehow when I appreciate) – and many others besides, but the meanings are deep and here the surface is illuminated by them or through them. A beautifully crafted poem!

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Wow, that is very high praise. You are too kind!
      I know “Visions of Johanna” is a song, but it’s also one of my favorite poems 😉 So, thank you, Lia!

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  3. SiriusSea Avatar
    SiriusSea

    Soooo Good, Nick ❤ !!!!

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  4. K.F. Hartless Avatar
    K.F. Hartless

    The concealed fang of the moon is always ready to bite. I enjoyed this poem very much.

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    1. Nick Allison Avatar
      Nick Allison

      Thank you so much, K.F. I’m so glad you enjoyed it!

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  5. myrelar Avatar
    myrelar

    Nice post!

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