The Truth About Tigers

occasional musings and free verse poetry, approximately



Mad Dark Winter Sky

How silly, Elephant thought as he roared at the tiger,
To think he could have slowly walked away.

She wrote a dream,
Gentle and sad,
Under a mad dark winter sky.

Spring came about,
Warm and quiet,
The white monster flew the garden,
And a ghost was born of joy.


This poem was co-crafted with my 9-year-old daughter, Phoebe, using those little word magnets that you can rearrange to create passages on your refrigerator—this, of course, makes it my new favorite poem.


Responses

  1. Bartholomew Barker Avatar
    Bartholomew Barker

    You should collaborate with her more often.

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    1. Jake Avatar
      Jake

      Absolutely, and thank you for the kind words, Bartholomew! We do engage in writing and painting together, and I’m currently teaching her guitar. I’m hopeful for more poetry collaborations with her in the future! She’s very artistic and creative and finding the right balance of encouragement without pushing too hard in any one direction seems to be key!

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    2. Melissa Lemay Avatar
      Melissa Lemay

      Agreed.

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  2. Kate Avatar
    Kate

    Very nice…has a dreamy feel.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Jake Avatar
      Jake

      Thank you, Kate. I agree

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      1. Kate Avatar
        Kate

        Most welcome, Jake. 🙂

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