The Truth About Tigers

occasional musings and free verse poetry, approximately



Austin

Skinny moms in skinny jeans,
with brightly inked upper-arm tattoos,
hair tied back in sloppy, stylish ponytails,
watch their shaggy-headed children play in the parks.

Hipster cowboys sporting pearl-snaps
and JBG trucker caps crowd SoCo and East Sixth,
discussing microbrews and soccer,
in gentrified happy hour haunts.

Future leaders clad in burnt orange,
books and dreams in tow,
stride confidently along Guadalupe,
toward idyllic visions of a better world.

Politicians pair pointy cowboy boots
with thousand-dollar suits,
convening for lunch in diners and taquerias
south of the pink granite edifice.

Coffee shops and cafes,
some homegrown, others corporate,
buzz and bustle, just as fervent at 2 pm
as they were at the break of dawn.

The daily suburban exodus unfolds,
a sluggish serpent of fiberglass and metal,
slowly slithering down Interstate 35
and coiling back up Mopac.

In the cars, there’s music.
in the bars, there’s music.
and beneath the overpasses,
there’s music too.

Upturned bucket drumbeats
drift out to meet wide-eyed tourists,
as the homeless seek refuge
from the merciless summer sun,

casting its last nostalgic rays
over the remnants of a once sleepy college town,
and rising to greet the steady rhythm
of a burgeoning metropolis.


This poem is a response to the dVerse Poetics Challenge: City Love. While my intention was to compose a “love letter” to Austin, TX, the creative process took its own course. The result may not be a traditional ode of adoration, but it’s a candid portrayal of the city as I experience it.

Love cities or hate them, for today’s poetics, I would like you to write a poem showing the beauty of your city or why you love the city you live in presently. If you do not dwell in a city these days, write about the city you had lived in earlier. Take us on a tour of your city and make us fall in love with it. Look out of your window, do you see people bustling by, can you see someone’s living room from there, do you see a sparrow sitting on the ledge or is there a park nearby from where you can hear kids playing and giggling! Get out in the streets, mingle with the people, see your city with new eyes and share with us. There are absolutely no restrictions on the form or the length.


Responses

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    I have only visited Austin once, and then it was when I travelled in business. I know the Austin weird, but I know it more as a center for high-tech.

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    1. Jake Wills Avatar
      Jake Wills

      It’s definitely that, as well!

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  2. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    Jake, your seamless blend of cultural elements, from microbrews and soccer to burnt orange-clad students, captures the essence of the city’s dynamic character, and your portrayal of politicians, coffee shops, and the daily suburban exodus adds layers to the narrative, creating a multi-dimensional snapshot of Austin’s daily life. This is too good!

    Sincerely,
    David

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    1. Jake Wills Avatar
      Jake Wills

      Thank you, David! I’m a big fan of your work, so that’s awesome to hear!

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  3. paeansunplugged Avatar
    paeansunplugged

    What a vivid and colourful portrayal of Austin with a plethora of details! Loved seeing it through your eyes.

    Thanks for joining in with this candid snapshot.

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  4. Oloriel Avatar
    Oloriel

    I love that it is candid, and it did give me a hint of suburbia, if it was a fever dream one wanted to set-up as a rest stop that quickly grew into a big city! Loved the poem, it has a certain rhythm to it that is pleasing.

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    1. Jake Wills Avatar
      Jake Wills

      Thank you! I appreciate your kind words.

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  5. Lia Avatar
    Lia

    So many creative people seem to come from Austin – there must be something in the sun there! “Hipster cowboys sporting pearl-snaps” – I love this, gives a concise and precisely poetic sketch!

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    1. Jake Wills Avatar
      Jake Wills

      Thank you!

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  6. Yvonne Osborne Avatar
    Yvonne Osborne

    Sorry for being so late. I have always wanted to visit Austin for the music. I think I would’ve love to have seen it as a sleepy college town. Maybe that’s the heart of it still?

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